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Here is a sample of student work that showcases their creativity and critical thinking skills. The essay is well-written and engaging, but it could benefit from more attention to grammar and punctuation. The writer does a good job of supporting their thesis with evidence from the text, but they struggle to organize their ideas in a logical manner. One area for improvement is the use of transition words and phrases to connect their paragraphs together. Additionally, the writer could benefit from more varied sentence structure to keep the reader engaged. Overall, the student demonstrates a good understanding of the material and shows promise as a writer. With some additional practice and feedback, they will be able to produce high-quality writing that effectively communicates their ideas. Grade: B+ Feedback: * Strengths: The essay is well-written and engaging, with a clear thesis statement. * Weaknesses: Grammar and punctuation errors, lack of transition words and phrases, varied sentence structure. * Suggestions for improvement: Practice using transition words and phrases, vary sentence structure, proofread carefully.